凱文英語(yǔ)中心，凱文老師，2011年上海高考英語(yǔ)作文解析

一、2011年上海高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中關(guān)于聯(lián)合國(guó)基金會(huì)組織背景

　　聯(lián)合國(guó)兒童基金會(huì)（UnitedNations International Children's Emergency Fund,簡(jiǎn)稱UNICEF），原名聯(lián)合國(guó)國(guó)際兒童緊急救助基金會(huì)，于1946年12月11日創(chuàng)建，其目的是滿足戰(zhàn)后歐洲與中國(guó)兒童的緊急需求。1950年起，它的工作擴(kuò)展到滿足全球所有發(fā)展中國(guó)家兒童和母親的長(zhǎng)期需求。1953年，UNICEF成為聯(lián)合國(guó)系統(tǒng)的永久成員，隸屬聯(lián)合國(guó)系統(tǒng)，受聯(lián)合國(guó)大會(huì)的委托，致力于實(shí)現(xiàn)全球各國(guó)兒童的生存、發(fā)展、受保護(hù)和參與的權(quán)利。

　　UnitedNations Children's Fund was created by the United Nations GeneralAssemblyon December 11, 1946, to provide emergency food andhealthcare to children in countries that had been devastated byWorld War II. In 1953, UNICEF became a permanent part of the UnitedNations System and its name was shortened from the original UnitedNationsInternational Children's Emergency Fund but it has continued to beknown by the popular acronym based on this old name. Headquarteredin New York City, UNICEF provideslong-term humanitarian and developmental assistance to children andmothers in developing countries.It is one of the members of the United Nations Development Groupand its Executive Committee.

　　UNICEFrelies on contributions from governments and private donors andUNICEF'stotal income for 2006 was $2,781,000,000. Governments contributetwo thirds of the organization'sresources; private groups and some 6 million individuals contributethe rest through the NationalCommittees. UNICEF's programs emphasize developing community-levelservices to promote the health and well-being of children. UNICEFwas awarded the NobelPeace Prize in 1965 and the Prince of Asturias Award of Concord in2006.

二、2011年上海高考英語(yǔ)作文申請(qǐng)信件一些經(jīng)典句式

　　本次2011年高考上海英語(yǔ)卷作文體裁是寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，這里給大家補(bǔ)充一些寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信常用的句式

（一）開(kāi)頭常用句式

1.Your advertisement made me unable to wait to write this applicationfor the post because I think I have the qualifications you areseeking.

2.I am writing to apply for the advertised post of …

3.I would like to apply for admission to your college.

4. Iwould like to further my studies in … department of your honoreduniversity.

5. Iwould like to apply for the graduate program of … in youruniversity.

6. Iwould like to apply for the scholarship that your department offersto students from other countries.

7.I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity tofurther my study in … towards a master’s degree in youruniversity.

8. Iwould like to apply for admission to your graduate school of..

　（二）結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Looking forward to your favorable reply.

2.I hope you will kindly send me an application form.

3.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forwardto hearing from you.

4.I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of myapplication.

5.I would be very grateful if you would consider my application andcould send me some information about the scholarship.

6.Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to yourreply.

7.I would be grateful if you can grant me an early reply about theresult of my application.

8.If any scholarships are available, I would appreciate it if youwould send me the necessary application forms.

9. Ihope my academic background will meet your general entrancerequirements for graduate study.

（三）其他常用句式

1. I have obtained my BA in … from University.

2. I am a senior student now and expect my graduation next summerfrom … University.

3. I major in … and did some research work during my undergraduateyears.

4．Sincegraduation I have been working in … which specializesin…

5. Now I am particularly interested in…

6. Would you please send me the necessary application forms and anyfurther details about …

7. I hope to further continue my research on …

8. Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and mytranscript.

9. I am interested in your MA programs in …, and wish to enter thisprogram. My background is as follows: …

（四）求職申請(qǐng)信常用句型

1. In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer myservices for the situation.

2. With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offermyself for the post.

3. Please consider me an applicant for the position which youadvertised in ~.

4. Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in ~,I wish to applyfor the position referred to.

5. In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender myservices.

6. Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me. I feel I canfill that position.

7.Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ nextsummer？

8. I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~company

9. I have been in the business for the last ~ years, and worked asthe director of the…department.

10. I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.

11. For the last ~ years, I have been and still am a / an~.

12. I'm ~ years of age, female / male, and have had ~ years'experience in a limited company's ~ office

13. I should be very glad to have a personal interview and canfurnish references if desired.

14. If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call inperson, on any day and at any time you may appoint.

15. Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant mean interview.

16. I trust that you'll give this application your favorableconsideration.

17. Should you give me a trial, I'll do my utmost to afford youevery satisfaction.

三、2011年上海高考英語(yǔ)作文參考范文

　2011上海高考英語(yǔ)題目：

若你是明啟中學(xué)李明，想申請(qǐng)一個(gè)扶貧項(xiàng)目，幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。根據(jù)以下啟示寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。

啟示：國(guó)際兒童基金會(huì)將資助中學(xué)生開(kāi)展扶貧項(xiàng)目，以幫助貧困地區(qū)的兒童。申請(qǐng)成功者將獲得項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)2000元。有意者請(qǐng)來(lái)信告知。

信中請(qǐng)包括：

　1．你個(gè)人基本情況

　2．你對(duì)申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目具體設(shè)想

　3．項(xiàng)目經(jīng)費(fèi)使用情況

　這類作文在篇章布局上可以用最常見(jiàn)的“總-分-總”的框架。首先，總起全文，介紹自己并說(shuō)明得知國(guó)際兒童基金將開(kāi)展扶貧項(xiàng)目，非常想申請(qǐng)此項(xiàng)目。接著，第二段說(shuō)明自己的想法和具體的方案。這里提供兩個(gè)方案供大家參考：1、買(mǎi)文具，日常生活用品。2、買(mǎi)教科書(shū)，或者號(hào)召同學(xué)募捐舊書(shū)，等等。最后，總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)自己非常熱切地想申請(qǐng)到這個(gè)扶貧項(xiàng)目。望國(guó)際兒童基金能盡早回復(fù)。

范文一：

　　DearSirs,

　　Hello!I’m Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As I’vealways been interested in charity, I’m writing to you in the hopethat I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my projectto help children in poverty-stricken areas.

　　Mypoverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initialstage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as Englishand Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be onthe look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stageof my program is to recruit high school students who have a strongdesire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armedwith relative knowledge to be qualified teachers. Lastly, we willset out forprimary schools, which are selectedand contacted in advance, to carry out our program.

　　Asto how to allocate the money, I’d like to use 1,000 for textbooks,and the rest to pay for the travelling fee ofvolunteers.

　　Iam looking forward to your reply, thanks!

　　Yours,

　　LiMing

　　亮點(diǎn)詞組句型歸納:

　　1.be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣

　　2.write to someone in the hope that 寫(xiě)信給某人以期（實(shí)現(xiàn)某愿望）

　　3.carry out 履行

　　4.poverty-stricken 貧困的

　　5.poverty-relief 扶貧的

　　6.given 考慮到

　　7.be on the look-out for 尋找

　　8.meet more demands 滿足更多的需求

　　9.recruit 招募

　　10.qualified 有資格的

　　11.set out for 出發(fā)前往

　　12.in advance 提前

　　13.allocate 分配

范文二：

　　DearSirs,

　　Myname is Li Ming and I’m a student from Mingqi High School. As Ihave grownup in the city, lending a hand to my rural peer group hasalways been my dream. I’m writing to apply forthe poverty-relief program launched by the International ChildrenFundthat I have heard about recently.

　　Infact, there are still a large number of school-age children whohave no access to good education in the undeveloped regions of ourcountry. So, I sincerely hope that I cando something to make adifference by making full use of your program. If I can get thesupporting money, first, I will use some parts of it to buy thetextbooks they need. Since the fund is limited, I will try to buysome second-hand reading materials for their free-timereading. Besides, I have to keep a small sum of money in order topay the postalcharges.

　　Lastbut not least, I will feel honored if I can get the fund to startthe poverty-reliefprogram in our country and I will try my best touse the fund. I’m looking forward to your reply!

　　Yours,Li Ming

亮點(diǎn)詞組句型歸納:

1. lend a hand to 幫助…

　　2.apply for 申請(qǐng)

　　3.the poverty-relief program launched by the International ChildrenFund由國(guó)際兒童基金會(huì)發(fā)起的扶貧項(xiàng)目

　　4.school-age children 學(xué)齡兒童

　　5.have no access to good education接受不到良好的教育

　　6.undeveloped region 欠發(fā)達(dá)地區(qū)

　　7.make a difference 有影響

　　8.make use of 利用

　　9.a small sum of money 一小筆錢(qián)

　　10.postal charge 郵費(fèi)

四、2011年上海英語(yǔ)高考寫(xiě)作與2005年上海春季高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作

　　2011年上海高考英語(yǔ)卷考察是寫(xiě)一份申請(qǐng)扶貧項(xiàng)目的申請(qǐng)信，翻閱往年高考上海英語(yǔ)試卷，在2005年春季高考中也考察到申請(qǐng)信，但事隔6年，難度系數(shù)也陡然上升。其實(shí)09年秋季高考也是申請(qǐng)信，但依然以理由型議論文為考核重點(diǎn)（06-10年連續(xù)四年考察的都是理由型的議論文）。

　　下文為05年春季的作文題目以及2篇范文

　Directions:write an English composition in 120-150 words according to theinstructions given below in Chinese.

　　你叫李宏，你校在為一批來(lái)自加拿大的交流學(xué)生（exchangestudent）征詢?yōu)槠趦芍艿淖∷藜彝ァＤ阌幸馍暾?qǐng)，寫(xiě)封信說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)的理由（包括所具備的條件）。

范文一：

　　DearMr. / Ms,

　　Ihave heard that our school is seeking for some home stays forexchange students who came from Canada.I guess my family meets the requirements and I would love toapply forit.

　　Myhouse is close to the Central Business District. From my house, onecan enjoy agood bird view of our city, as it is on the 42nd floor.What’s more, I will arrange sightseeingfor the exchange students to have a deep impression of our culturaldeposits and greatdevelopment.

　　Myfather works in a foreign-owned enterprise and my mother is anEnglish teacher. In view of this, our family will have no troublecommunicating with them. Besides, we even have a guest room in ourhouse, which allows the exchange student to have his or her ownspace.

　　Inconclusion, I definitely have the confidence of being a wonderfulhost to the exchangestudents. It is a great honor if I get this chance to show them theculture and modernization of our city and to leave them a deepimpression of hospitality.

　　Yours,

　　LiHong

范文二：

　　DearHeadmaster,

　　Iam writing to you in the hope of attaining the opportunity ofaccommodating exchange students from Canada. I think my family canprovide them withdecent conditions and my reasonsare as follows.

　　Firstly,my family lives in the downtown of Shanghai. Therefore, we haveeasy access to all kinds of transportations, such as subway, bus,and plane, thereby greatly facilitate the exchange students’traveling.

　　Secondly,my parents are local Shanghai residents, indicating that they canafford advantageous advices for foreign students on where to go andwhat to do during their fortnight-stay, thus enabling them to makefull use of their sojourn.

　　Lastbut not least, my family is living in a large detached house, so wehave sufficient vacant rooms for them, which I believe is mostdesired for tired travelers who’ve gone all the way from Canada toChina.

　　Therefore,I am confident to provide the exchange students with comfortableliving conditions. And I would really appreciate if you could giveme the chance. Thank you for reading my application.

　　Yours,

　　LiHong

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